The depth of sharpness is far too small..., in my eyes it should be from the face (like now) to the bum...
P.S.: the grain was a very good idea, go on with that. But the gutted areas are not too good, in this special case it's ok, just for the next time, ya know what I mean?
I would love to see more of 'her'.
Damn, I need 100 words to give you a feedback? That sucks, anyway, I like your work very much, keep at it.
this is brilliant as is! Therefore I disagree with the DOF issue in the critique... I think the shallow focus makes her more sexy, somewhat covering up (?) her beauty making your imagination work harder. Looking at the grain, I was convinced this is film, until I briefly visited your web. Nicely faked anyway... Very well done!
Just ONE (for me a big) thing:
The depth of sharpness is far too small..., in my eyes it should be from the face (like now) to the bum...
P.S.: the grain was a very good idea, go on with that.
But the gutted areas are not too good, in this special case it's ok, just for the next time, ya know what I mean?
I would love to see more of 'her'.
Damn, I need 100 words to give you a feedback? That sucks, anyway, I like your work very much, keep at it.
Cheers
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