this is brilliant as is! Therefore I disagree with the DOF issue in the critique... I think the shallow focus makes her more sexy, somewhat covering up (?) her beauty making your imagination work harder. Looking at the grain, I was convinced this is film, until I briefly visited your web. Nicely faked anyway... Very well done!
Wooow..a stunning shot! And by the way, you've got a great gallery ;D
I've got a little question about this: Did you use any PS-effect/texture on this photo or maybe a high iso-number? Because it looks quite "grainy"..Was it your intention? (Sry, I don't mean to offend you or your work, I'm a newbie at photography and I'm just curious )